Hill,+Shelby

//Hi Ladies - things look okay, but my concern is that there is a lot of resistance to this act--you'll have to do a bang-up job of proving that the act is actually doing some good (you'll want very specific examples) and of its potential if the money was there (again, through specifics--what can the act do with money that it isn't doing now because of lacking funds?) I haven't seen this evidence in your work so far, so I'm concerned that you cannot prove this strongly enough in your proposal. What you're proposing is that people support the act and give more money for it--or at least advocate more government spending for it, but in order to be persuasive you'll have to prove it's ability to succeed if the money was there. Make sense?// ~Ms. W

Our purpose is to inform parents and potental voters about the problems that come along with the No Child Left Behind Act. We hope to inform people about these problems but not turn them against the act. We want them to know that the act is indeed benifical but that it does have some flaws that need to be worked out. We think that the act should be reinstated, someone just needs to come up with a better budget plan for the act. We are going to make a proposal to purpose our problem and solution. The voice of our paper will be hopeful and concerned. We are concerned that if a democrat gets elected to be president then the will eliminate the nclb act and we do not want to see that happen. We are hopeful because we know that more positive things can come out of this act and we want it to stick around. And we also know that it is possible for the act to be better funded. We will use a chart or graph to show budget for the nclb act. We want to make our readers feel as concnered as we are. We want them to become more educated about the act and to realize that it is benifical and that we should keep it around.

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==My name is Shelby. I am a freshmen at Alma college. I am a member of the Alma college swimming and diving team. I live in Newberry 115. My major is Elementary education and my minors are english and history. I have a boyfriend named Billy, he goes to MSU. My hometown is Waterford Michigan. I have an older brother, Austin. He is 22 years old. He is a firemen.==